Pride's Folly

By Silence

Who do you think you're talking to
When you look to her and him
Eyes wander to this and that

Who do you think hears your word
When the target your screaming at
Isnt the one who the message is ment

Who do you think your better than
When you can terrorize and degrade anyone you want
You're are nothing

Because you are so smart you use it to mask the cowardice
When courage takes the stage good women and men
Do not ignore it

For all your fancy words and praises of yourself
They are nothing compared to one couragious act
Humility, the ability to say you were wrong and ask forgiveness

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© 2009 Silence
Published on Friday, February 13, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Thursday, December 17, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    This summed up perfectly my feelings for some key people in my life at this time. Hmm.

  • Riven Waker On Wednesday, June 3, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    I really like the repeating thematic and linguistic structure/framework of each of your stanzas... and you really hit home with the final output... very skillfully done

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, February 14, 2009, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    Well spoken. Speaks volumes

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, February 14, 2009, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    you have given direction one of "humility's' traveled paths.....thank you........well done

  • whisperer On Saturday, February 14, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    powerful, enganging like a cattle prod to the ribs

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