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Distortion
By Silence
You dont remember me
But I remember you
How could I forget
I gave up everything thing for you
But it was nothing but a faded memory
I show you love and I get nothing
How could you have treated me that way
You ruled my world, my existence unwhole without you
My soul shattered my will bent
You distorted and disfigured me
Made me what I was once again
A creature no one can love
My blood boiled
My heart beat
All charged to release it
Ready for his arrival
You made him have form
You created him from nothing inside me
You scream his name because you want him not me
Even all I feel you dont care
You want him
You want your master
Someone defiling and degrading you
Day after day for joy
I was to soft to make you happy
He is harsh and cruel
And you lust for him
You love who you think I am
You love Seru
My hatred
My pain
My lust
My evil....
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© 2006 Silence
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A former member wrote:
Beutiful! Nice start you have here I'm waiting to see some more beuty!
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On Saturday, February 18, 2012, Devilish
(2657)
wrote:
Nice.. Hello you.. Congrats on POD. well deserved..
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On Wednesday, August 19, 2009, skully
(43) wrote:
wicked
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2007, Distorted_Reality
(101) wrote:
yeah the first to lines was from a song well even so it was very well written and I enjoyed it
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A former member wrote:
i love the whole thing, but i love the "loving him" part about the monster. all i can say is woah...
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On Saturday, June 24, 2006, l mo
(55) wrote:
::applauds:: ~night
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On Monday, June 19, 2006, kiss of the dark
(32) wrote:
Wow Jonathan!! Great job...it takes me back...
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A former member wrote:
I think I have lived this... Nice capture-of-moment.
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On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
wow... this is totally what i was feeling when i broke up with my mistake... but *cough* umm still sorta feeling like this... i swear some ppl just so totally suck and i will not take him back... well anywho i wish i could put this on my fav list but i ca
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On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
*cant
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On Friday, June 16, 2006, Mathesix
(40) wrote:
this is good, but in a general sort of way.. I don't know, I mean, yeah I understand, but I don't really feel it. Sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but I'm just trying to be constructive. I enjoy critism of my works, so I'm sorry if you don't..but this was ver
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On Friday, June 16, 2006, Mathesix
(40) wrote:
very good for a first post. Welcome to DP and don't let my words dissuade you..you have talent...-Josh
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On Thursday, June 15, 2006, Silence
(4) wrote:
Thanks. But what song by them?
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm, very interesting to say the least, but quite good. welcome to dp.
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On Monday, June 12, 2006, The Shattered Heart
(32) wrote:
You already know what I think about this but I love it all the more. Welcome to DP my friend.
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