Unreal Love

By Silence

All I wanted was one kiss
You gave your whole body
When all I wanted was someone real
You were a toy

I let you slip through my fingers
But I see that you never were in my hold
See the ice in your eyes
Dressed in silk

Soft and cold
So you can gentley stab in
You took up to the last drop of warmth in my veins

Hard to say what got my attention
If it was the blue skin
Or the heartbeat turning still
With the grey in your sight

I spent my days saying it over and over
"I love you so very much"
You said how you didnt feel a thing
"A doll doesnt hurt"
"A doll doesnt love"
"A doll doesnt change"

So I struck through the tears
Hoping to crack the procelin
But all I came back with
A bloodied hand and a new found love of hate

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© 2006 Silence
Published on Saturday, June 17, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Shivers down my spine. Amazing (:

  • Ashteroth On Monday, January 26, 2009, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    ...Holly crap man. Book marking that!!!!!

  • Mylissa On Saturday, December 9, 2006, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Wow, great write...

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    This just gave me the chills it was erotic vision that just ate at me cause it seemed so familar in so many ways ~nightly

  • The Shattered Heart On Sunday, June 18, 2006, The Shattered Heart (30)By person wrote:

    Simply lovely Hun. Pain, Sorrow, and Hate at the same time. -hugs- So nicely said.

  • Mahakala On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    i like it...

  • Mahakala On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    lol sorry just read your profile so im being a smart a**... well anywho it brought to mind the feelings of being used... knowing it yet not doing anything about it...

  • A former member wrote: Painful. Nicely reflected here. Good work.

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