Comments by All Members
- "for some reason this one reminded me of my first girlfriend (the first 2 stanzas)I felt as if she were taling to me. That was a long time ago. powerful writing from the heart
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Posted by Unknown on "A thousand ways to bleed" by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
- "love the shot sharp blast of lines that whiplash the senses, especially in the initial stanzas..wnats to shed clothes and get on the sweat toils of sex right away...yeppie, thats alright by me,"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Memory remains" by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
- "for your age I like the way you think and write, it slots together nicely...I think your writing will also get better, so hopefullt I can track its progress!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "shiny penny" by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
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