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- "Damn. This had me leaned close to the screen and holding my breath. Agony, is what I got from it...as Doc said, you never fail. This was wonderfully sad."
Posted by Six-Out on "leatherette" by slow.burn.star
- "the compressed state of the write made me read it faster, as i was catching my breath the deeper into it i got, and the end, the 'whisper' was my breath rushing out of me, enticing write."
Posted by Saint Sentient on "UndeRsight_____" by slow.burn.star
- ""you closed your porcelain hands around my neck
and delicatly choked me to sleep. " only you, can rip the tears from my eyes. this is magnificent...how did i miss this before. i love the way you word things-you dont see it...ever."
Posted by Twilight on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "Wow. The way this evolved...into the piece that it is...it's just astounding to watch your words move."
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
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