- Plastic Injection Molded -
By slow.burn.star
kissing you i tried to
imagine. replace. fireworks.
imagine. c h o k ed up.
words fleeting.
absence of dreaming. pastels.
everything fleeting and longing
for out of reach. t o uching
something like plastic for
warmth. feeling you dying when
i breathe & plastic.
my eyes seethe. & reaching
for that. c o r o n ary artery.
explosion. longing. fireworks.
warm lips
under
seranwrap.
my feelings behind, words on
the other line. b u r n me.
maybe i could
give you more plastic.
take it off mute.
read it in english. go back to
question no.1 when i answered
with my plastic. e m otions
fleeting.
bleeding red no.40.
love is like
bleeding p l a s tic.
what am i dreaming for.
w a iting.
packaged for your convenience.
waiting for that. fireworks.
& im sorry that i look so real.
Awards
Comments on "- Plastic Injection Molded -"
-
On Sunday, August 28, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
I hope you are well, wherever you are. You and Godot got me through so many grief filled nights, a lifetime ago. Thank you for that.
-
On Saturday, December 24, 2005, ashrain
(16) wrote:
its like....i read this slower hoping it wouldnt end. everyword dragged...but in a fantastic way. ~ash
-
A former member wrote:
Demosthenes hit it on the nose...it sort of overwhelms you as you read...the grim perfection of it all.
-
On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Clementine
(121) wrote:
comment removed by DP admins
-
On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
its one of the things you read fast cause its so pretty. then when you get done you read it fast again cause its so pretty.-B
-
On Sunday, May 9, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i loved a girl, polly, polly ethlene, she was everything to me and everything all at once, until her plastic pieces broke. love the love/plastic play. forlorn poetry, the perfect 4am find.
-
A former member wrote:
'love is like
bleeding p l a s tic.' this.is.lovely; and your style/formatting is spectactular... i like this poem a lot ...it bleeds wonderfully ...
-
On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
This is what I love about you star...it's indescribable, but amazing.
-
On Friday, April 16, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
wonderful conclusion to a marvellously written piece... your formatting is always compelling and distinctive, too; loved it.
-
On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
damn I dig chicks with glasses and a piercing like that.. gota move to the u.s.. ennyways . great poem. they said it. provoking and trippy
-
On Thursday, April 15, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
very trippy.. I definitely dig it. :::OLd
-
On Thursday, April 15, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
btw.. I love your name.
-
On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
I love this, how you've expressed it is so trippy quirky, and beautiful. Lovely work. -L
-
On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
I wonder if this is what a heart attack feels like to the soul. Thought provoking piece. ~ mw