- Plastic Injection Molded -

By slow.burn.star

kissing you i tried to
imagine. replace. fireworks.
imagine. c h o k ed up.
words fleeting.
absence of dreaming. pastels.
everything fleeting and longing
for out of reach. t o uching
something like plastic for
warmth. feeling you dying when
i breathe & plastic.
my eyes seethe. & reaching
for that. c o r o n ary artery.
explosion. longing. fireworks.
warm lips
under
seranwrap.
my feelings behind, words on
the other line. b u r n me.
maybe i could
give you more plastic.
take it off mute.
read it in english. go back to
question no.1 when i answered
with my plastic. e m otions
fleeting.
bleeding red no.40.
love is like
bleeding p l a s tic.
what am i dreaming for.
w a iting.
packaged for your convenience.
waiting for that. fireworks.


& im sorry that i look so real.


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Copyright 2004 slow.burn.star
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ashrain On Saturday, December 24, 2005, ashrain (16)By person wrote:

    its like....i read this slower hoping it wouldnt end. everyword dragged...but in a fantastic way. ~ash

  • A former member wrote: Demosthenes hit it on the nose...it sort of overwhelms you as you read...the grim perfection of it all.

  • Clementine On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

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  • Demosthenes On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    its one of the things you read fast cause its so pretty. then when you get done you read it fast again cause its so pretty.-B

  • Jonas On Sunday, May 9, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i loved a girl, polly, polly ethlene, she was everything to me and everything all at once, until her plastic pieces broke. love the love/plastic play. forlorn poetry, the perfect 4am find.

  • A former member wrote: 'love is like bleeding p l a s tic.' this.is.lovely; and your style/formatting is spectactular... i like this poem a lot ...it bleeds wonderfully ...

  • Chameleon On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    This is what I love about you star...it's indescribable, but amazing.

  • purr_verse On Friday, April 16, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    wonderful conclusion to a marvellously written piece... your formatting is always compelling and distinctive, too; loved it.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    damn I dig chicks with glasses and a piercing like that.. gota move to the u.s.. ennyways . great poem. they said it. provoking and trippy

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, April 15, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    very trippy.. I definitely dig it. :::OLd

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, April 15, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    btw.. I love your name.

  • Lynaes On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    I love this, how you've expressed it is so trippy quirky, and beautiful. Lovely work. -L

  • manywalks On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    I wonder if this is what a heart attack feels like to the soul. Thought provoking piece. ~ mw

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