Comments by All Members
- "holy hell....this felt like a dream....a delirious chaotic dimly lit dream...and i REALLY didn't want to wake up. seriously, there was nothing about this peice that i didn't love."
Posted by verablue on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "breathtaking, cinematic, this held me in quiet rapture, anticipation and awe, i could read this over and over, "
Posted by Anth on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "i love your work, you can feel a truely dark and crushing emotion in every syllable, once you see a speck of light, it is cloaked, your words are always so intense and well chosed, your amazing, outstanding write as always ~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "This is different than what usually flows from your fingers, but it's no less divine. So many lines that are quotable, but so many things tell me it's not right, because this is too personal. I'm sorry, and this is tremedously amazing."
Posted by Six-Out on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "your words kill me every time… like im a silhouette guardian holding your hand, dim and observant i still feel connected to you... i feel empathy knowing your life.... i know you will find that warmth someday, i have faith in you still.... *heart*"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "i think its a releif that you havent lost your fire.... i am always scared you will forget yourself and the beauty that you can drip from that pen..."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "This was just entirely fan-bloomin'-tastic..."and you were more tender/than I could ever recall/like a child smashing ants"..what a whammy of a line to finish the previous two. Altogether this was perfection."
Posted by carlosjackal on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "yup, I can only echo what others have said -it's just my opinion but this is beyond sublime -it moved me and intrigued me on so many levels. Too many lines to quote and i ahve nos uperlatives to do it justice so I will just say...wow!"
Posted by Unknown on "facsimile: odium for fainéant" by slow.burn.star
- "'placid glacial dreams', damn that's nice. Killer imagery. If you were trying to get the atmosphere across in this one, you hit the nail sqaure through the board. Bravo. -END "
Posted by Unknown on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "You are one of the best in painting vivid imagery with your words. I particularly liked the contrast in the lines "and you were more tender
then I could ever recall like a child smashing ants." Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "hard hearing about another, but as always, you astound me. if only you could act your feelings (ie poetry), you would be more happy. but that is just my oppinion."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "the images you invoke in this are so beautiful and harsh.."blood smeared down my thigh like a watercolor sunset of my cells" it's a sense of lovely with a bite..and the last line is perfect. amazing write."
Posted by Unknown on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "This sways at a whisper.. a sultry, aching piece.. crushing in the loveliest of manners.. you're fucking phenomenal."
Posted by Unknown on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- ""blood smeared down my thigh like a watercolor sunset" Fantastic imagery! Vivid & sexual, wanton, thrillful.you. & even softly tender; "...soft soapy tears," even if it's a burden; or tender as "a child smashing ants." Yea, that's the stuff of poetry. ..."
Posted by Unknown on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "..."everything numb and out of reach" - my fave line in this one. Love the snowy ending; well done!!"
Posted by Unknown on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- ""the sound of your
beating heart
under foggy glass." it's so hard to hold onto something that makes you numb. this was so breathtaking."
Posted by dying angel on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
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