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- "*than pain *than hate *than the beaten girl : otherwise, quite neatly done. The last line brings it home well- always sad to realise that no one will care unless you care yourself (at least that's what I got out of it) write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Even the blind see" by waterchica999
- "I was so thinking this very thought just moments before the roll of dice lead me here. "
Posted by Dei on "Moving on" by waterchica999
- "I can relate .... I just wanted something steady in my life that wouldn't make excuses or deceive me into false comfort. This short write said volumes .... Well done! ....thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "Moving on" by waterchica999
- "It always sucks when something good tapers off and comes to the end of its cycle. But life is a cycle so you gotta just be ready for when the opportunity reaches out and grabs you along for another ride. Sad read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Sweetly Sour Memories..." by waterchica999
- "plus the fact it's the Stanley Kubrick film title sort of impedes it...you might consider using " " to at least acknowledge, so as to avoid confusion...maybe? Or to separate from it....dunno"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Even the blind see" by waterchica999
- "Wow!"Its so sad to say/that your my brand of Heroine". I love that line! I was in the same obssesive/addictive position for a long time, and I really like the way you put it into words. A very enjoyable read.
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Posted by Unknown on "Escapes a Dream" by waterchica999
- "I felt kind of confused by the end, like there should have been a climax to all the build up- but then again, why write somthing so conventionally? nice job. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Her" by waterchica999
- "your economy of words serves you well here........less is more......you create a melencholy mood here............well done................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Eternaly Fucked" by waterchica999
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