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Escapes a Dream
By waterchica999
As I lie in this bed
listening to the baddered sounds in my head
I wonder what it would mean
if i just got up to leave
I never had the streangth to leave this dirty place
I didn't realized all the blood draning from my veins
I should have see what was to come
I could have stopped all this non-sense from the very first starting shot
I wanted to see for my self
I hung on to your scent like a crack bitch on her last rock
its so sad to say
that your my brand of Heroine
Now as i stumble out on to this creaky floor
I can see your blood shot eyes
your senses perk as your smell fear
my senses dull as a reaction to you
Who would want to be
on high alert
when Escapes is a mere dream?
Not me.....
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© 2006 Frozen Rose
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A former member wrote:
kREJSI and good...great write, keep it up!!
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A former member wrote:
Wow!"Its so sad to say/that your my brand of Heroine". I love that line! I was in the same obssesive/addictive position for a long time, and I really like the way you put it into words. A very enjoyable read.
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A former member wrote:
*shivers* "Who would want to be/on high alert/when Escapes a dream" Gods alive, you've poked your fingers through my chest and stolen my heart from its cavern with this one. This is exactly like addiction...addiction to love, the most brutal kind. ~*Beth*
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On Sunday, July 23, 2006, Fading_Smile
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wrote:
thank you for the comment, and wow, this one, like being addicted to someone with the inability to walk away. "when Escapes a dream, not me...." i enjoyed this
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