Comments by All Members
- "mmmm mmm this is great, I dunno, but I think I sensed a reference to Milton and perhaps homer somewhere in here... so many teasing lines, so much traditional imagery"
Posted by Unknown on "Sleeping in Blood" by FallenSky
- "hmmm a spinnner of brightly colored fables you are my CrestFallenSky... I hope you are not fallen still; the ending songs within your songs are very distinguishing... very stylish "
Posted by Unknown on "A Tale of Beauty and Decay" by FallenSky
- "Beautiful poem. It is wonderful word for word. A sad poem but in between the lines I see some hope ..."
Posted by Unknown on "a soft denial" by FallenSky
- ""Lifeless, yet truly animated,
A ballroom lit with starsong light". . this was just amazing, the imagery/the grace and ease of it all. . just beautiful. i agree with twi, who quoted some amazing lines as well. .
"My words are not so deft
To be reci"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "a minstrel’s hymn" by FallenSky
- "This poem was beautiful. Your a great writer and I'm sure you will get far with your tramendous talent."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm bleeding" by FallenSky
- "As she awakens from her deepest slumber
And hears me for the first time " o god...such meaning..."I wipe the tears from her pallid face
And replace them with my own,
Yet I dare not say, I fear…
If I opened my eyes,
"
Posted by Twilight on "a minstrel’s hymn" by FallenSky
- "your words are so graceful. so full-filling. profoud things left unsaid...happens every day. this is so true. and profoud in itself...im seriously feeling this piece."Six serpentine candles flicker with life,
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Posted by Twilight on "a minstrel’s hymn" by FallenSky
- "after almost a year i am reading this piece again. i feel i tmuch more. i have been through what it takes to truly love this poem...wow. "
Posted by Twilight on "Love Scenario" by FallenSky
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