Beneath The Ruins of an Autumn Twilight

By FallenSky

Oh! Please carry me away,
Down the swan road
Lying hidden in the sea.
Carry me away from home,
For this place I’ve held so dear
Grows foreign to my eyes.

And now, I see the autumn twilight
Bound in an opaque noose,
Oh! Please comfort me,
Cradle me in thy wings of lily-white
And recite to me, a poem,
Penned by a poet with no name

Autumn night embrace my heart
Revive it from this shade of gray,
Entreat these words to free their poet,
This poet with no name,
A knavish one with a vulgar hand,
The hand that holds the pen

My candles nearly burn away,
I watch the flicker-dance,
A dance that heeds not the flow of time,
Nor the behesting voice of death.
Mockingly, it stands, then bows,
Never seeing the ebb of life so near

Under thy wings of lily-white
The opaque petals fall on me,
My cry is drowned in a silent tear
That falls as I’m carried away,
Down the winding swan road
Hidden beneath the sea

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Published on Friday, November 15, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    packed with stunning beauty and vivid imagery an amazing write beautiful written:)

  • A former member wrote: Very exquisite....I could see everything happening in my mind...wonderous piece......

  • A former member wrote: Hmm caught this because i saw twi's comment on the scree and was interested by the title. I am glad I did for it is a small treasure.

  • DoctorAsh On Tuesday, May 6, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    What brilliant imagery you create here .. i was totaly pulled into this piece . Well kept . nice

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