Comments by All Members
- "I like how the Two stanza are in the same form, though distant on the page, and both conveying a similar notion. Thank you for sharing, as I could relate. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "August And Romance" by Guillotine
- "it made my heart sore to read this... i miss this, want it more than anything. you told me how painstaking it was to get this piece out... i believe it's because you actually magicked words for those lingering bewitching spell&starbound moments where there were none before. it is difficult not to wish these words were for me. beyond brilliance. divinity. much love and respect, my sweet, brave, fellow adventurer and warrior poet. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "Unspoken" by Guillotine
- "I love the tone and feel of this piece , it has spontaneity and life and something of a strange aura of tension like a Mombassa painting , surreal and comforting"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Unspoken" by Guillotine
- "Short and powerful, this poem is a ghostly atmosphere condensed and concentrated in a powerful emotional concoction. My favorite part was "ensconced between the paraphrase and the answer". I'm not yet sure what this means, but to me it speaks of the ineffable beauty of nature, which seems to hold answers no man can read without becoming a part of it. -cheryl "
Posted by Unknown on "breathe.in" by Guillotine
- "mmm it's like a cataclysmic flood after a long drought ( or writer's block ) maybe ... 'spangling universes through my eyelids' ... grand and powerful tone ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on ".breaking the levies." by Guillotine
- "It spoke of sadness to me! Resurrection of ink in my eye balls and Ill rupture worlds dripping black onto this paper! Awesome write I enjoyed! Thanks"
Posted by Slingnasty on ".breaking the levies." by Guillotine
- "Thoughtful and quite ponderous in some ways. How we do tend to question... and question we do without ever really receiving many answers in return. Nice write, has me thinking now..."
Posted by Symbol on "Dinner-Cups And Coffee-Spoons" by Guillotine
- "The last lines filled with uncertainly, sometimes we truly have no answer for ourselves despite it may possibly be clear...? Great write here. Deserving of a glorious ten. ;)"
Posted by Symbol on "Stockholm's Praise To The Dead" by Guillotine
- "Such descriptions, you blew me away. Vivid and quite capturing. Thanks for the read. Very unique style of writing you have there :) "
Posted by Symbol on "Midnight Garden" by Guillotine
- "I love the....oneness and...singularity in this. Becoming one with the background...the hills. Maybe I'm reading into it, but it's really amazing. Absolutely superb. Thanks."
Posted by thyyic on "breathe.in" by Guillotine
- "Brilliant work. "soft glow of ghost lamps" Beautiful part of the line. My fav. Ten ten ten."
Posted by Symbol on "breathe.in" by Guillotine
- "great opening image accompanies this otherworldly calming feeling you've captured...love my smoky misty hills ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "breathe.in" by Guillotine
- "this has a hallowed be thy name tone to it. i adore it. it felt sacred and harmonious and true. thanks so much."
Posted by Unknown on "breathe.in" by Guillotine
- "loved the language and texture of this... aged satin and new linen... impossible not to touch and feel this work...glad to see you posting again"
Posted by NikesRain on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
- "what's this minimalism stuff ;) great to see ya posting some new work, man. I always thought of eternity as an epitaph... but perhaps it's the epithet of life, even as it's the epitaph of death.... I like that last line; well done and welcome back."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Longing" by Guillotine
- "Very stout in your opinion of death, and I enjoy it. Most people sit on the fence when it comes to that subject. I paid particular attention to the part of embroidering leaves, and the thought of such beauty in death makes me glad for it. Perhaps I'll get off the fence soon myself. "
Posted by Unknown on "Plathora" by Guillotine
- "The last line made me shiver with foreboding. I arched my back and bared my teeth. There is cynicism here, but it is softened with exquisite wording. I can't say all I want to, because nothing more is coming out. - Insert leaving comment here. - "
Posted by Unknown on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
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