Dinner-Cups And Coffee-Spoons

By Guillotine




If only there were less years for these bones;
The subtle tock of a misanthrope clock -
But if every tick should lick
Its paraphrase tongue
Upon the horizon;
What more should I see
But the fury of insubstantial wrath
Caught as a black feather in the wind?

Will there be time for more?
Should I break beneath the question I would ask?

Were there less months for these eyes;
Would not the days and delicate ways
Surely be lost from sight as might
Its juxtapose touch
Upon the soul;
What more should I feel
Amongst its short-hand caress
But a black feather in the wind?

Would I dare ask for more?
Would I speak the question I would ask?

Were the less seconds for this tongue;
The intoxicant slur of a misbegotten word -
The frost-bitten dreams, less than they seem
Would parade their facade
Before my lips;
What more could I hope
But to breathe a whisper to
A black feather, caught in the wind?

After the evening,
Would it have been worth it at all?
To push the circumstance
Into one overwhelming question;
Would it be worth it to ask it at all?

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© 2008 RainWhisper
Published on Tuesday, February 5, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: risk vs reward... . .heart vs hardening......i find this heavy at this time of year...youve always ahd a way of pondering the details and making them indelible in our minds' world......blessings~

  • Taunting The Reaper On Monday, February 11, 2008, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    We do linger. We do wonder and even if we know the answer there's a little part inside of us that hopes we're wrong. Great write.

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, February 6, 2008, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    It really isn't worth lingering on passed mistakes. Asking questions can help to avoid making them a second time, but that's about it. Can't pull the bullet from the wall, and put it back in the barrel. That next morning over coffee, thinking about last evening's mistakes usually just makes you feel worse. Hahah. Maybe I'm totally reading the wrong ideas into this, but that's what I took from this, like an ink blot test. Guess now you know what's been on my mind lately, huh? Nice work. Write on.

  • The Zebra Warrior On Wednesday, February 6, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (1495)By person wrote:

    stop blathering! :P

  • A former member wrote: I can't begin to explain the ways that this hits me. Awesome write. -END

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