Comments by All Members
- "I loved the comparison here. Clever. The build up to the ending was great, it kept me on the edge. I gotta say, I was holding in a sneeze as I read it :p ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "A Sneeze" by stargaze0991
- "*caught a lite sneeze* Sorry..it's what it made me think of...interesting concept, to say the least, and well played with, needs a tiny bit of refining and it would be perfect..and it touches a personal note, for me.."
Posted by Unknown on "A Sneeze" by stargaze0991
- "A good message. We do well to keep ourselves in perspective. Humble before God. I'm glad you had the courage to post despite the controversy the subject causes on this site"
Posted by Unknown on "Please Lord" by stargaze0991
- "Key to true faith... think or feel?
Im amused at my former comment. While my thoughts follow your piece, I took a totally different rout in reading this. This time I asked a question, the last time I sympathized. Way to keep me thinking."
Posted by Doc on "Awakening Faith" by stargaze0991
- "You know, of all the things that youll find in this place, it is a rare day that you find some true honest hope. Its just so rare today, especially among this community, where to hope or be optomistic is commit some sort of shunned sin. "
Posted by Doc on "The Car Ride" by stargaze0991
- "*sighs* To pray, fervently, for a feeling, a memory, a heartbreak...to be gone completely and have you whole again. The imagery in this, and the rhyme scheme in this, matched gorgeously. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "May it be Gone" by stargaze0991
- "i almost cried, reading this, the emotion is shaking my shoulders and my veins are almost collapsing, i can feel it...poetry IS a dying art, lost to the thud of today's fastpaced world...we are losing ourselves, and our beauty is lost to the swamp of tele"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "An elegy to the Writers" by stargaze0991
- "amen to that. too many have been lost to going too far with the cutting and drugs and stuff. may all the others that read this take your message to heart"
Posted by Muse on "An elegy to the Writers" by stargaze0991
- "i sang "kyrie" in choir in high school. there was something about the words that filled me with the saddest encompassing peace from an otherwise void. this was different than what i expected, but still beautiful nonetheless."
Posted by Unknown on "Kyrie Eleison" by stargaze0991
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