Awakening Faith

By stargaze0991

Godbeams
chimerical allure
enchanting the innocents
dreaded mesmerizing feeling
overtaking

Tempted
ominous attracting
doubts become embedded
could I be wrong
misgivings

Faith
something given
now becoming prominent
feeling disconcerted about this
thinking

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© 2005 stargaze0991
Published on Monday, November 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • Doc On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Doc (145)By person wrote:

    Key to true faith... think or feel? Im amused at my former comment. While my thoughts follow your piece, I took a totally different rout in reading this. This time I asked a question, the last time I sympathized. Way to keep me thinking.

  • Doc On Monday, November 28, 2005, Doc (145)By person wrote:

    Im glad im not the only one who feels liks this. Doc

  • stargaze0991 On Monday, November 28, 2005, stargaze0991 (11)By person wrote:

    thank you

  • A former member wrote: "feeling disconcerted about this thinking'..yes...you words are quite attractive...~Diviana~

  • urbanhumility On Monday, November 28, 2005, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    your words are attractive here.......each word spinning on its own...............well done...................urban

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