Comments by All Members
- "...this is tremendous & brutal: a woman in the grasp of drugs that make her a zombie & a child left unattended... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Zombie Queen" by RubyXero
- "Kids gotta come first as I know you too know, and I'm sure you are a great mom. Might wanna switch from Visa to Mastercard? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Zombie Queen" by RubyXero
- "oh to be in the zone, but i think what kind of powders under that credit card is what makes or breaks it! i suppose a night of recovery or days from recovery makes the difference in powders. but i loved it, but i dont think you'll ever feel rested on that shit when theres kids that need tending. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Zombie Queen" by RubyXero
- "It's hard to deal with all the stress, and it must be terribly difficult to know that whatever you do effects someone else, too. I'm sure that you'll succeed though. Love is something worth pulling yourself together for! Great Write.
- Miz"
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "...A Family of Two..." by RubyXero
- "This tells a story. Im wondering if the story is told by a person who is insane, because that would be fantastic. If not, I have to say, it's all over the place, like there's no organization."
Posted by Unknown on "Mirrors" by RubyXero
- "wonderful write... wondering what dreams mean? do you actually mean "the symbology" they contain? or just the symbology of visions in them? Id like to know more about that... your poem was beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "This spoke to me as I feel I'm waking up after sleepwalking through life for 10 years. Beautiful simple wording, much enjoyed - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "Poetry is a way of expressing oneself, but it takes a poet to understand a poet. Foolish people can't understand it. Well, i guess you're free to share things here. Everyone here got his burden, so we all understand other people's burdens as well. Please, see my other work. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "RubyXero love this poem. Dreams are so allusive at time it hard to pin down what they mean but you did a good job here.
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Posted by Unknown on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "wow you hit that one right on the nail. my poetry makes me more translucent then I usually like... and such is why I only share it with a select few"
Posted by RubyXero on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "One by one perhaps, he loves me, he loves me not... We'll always wonder about what might have been, thanks Ruby."
Posted by dwells on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "very interesting topic, and sometimes dream interpritation can be black and white. i used to have a book of definitions on symbolizism of dreams and it was helpful because some dreams make no sense! but others have a very clear secret to be had. its very intersting though. i recommend a book of dream meanings. its fascinating to know. its almost like a psyhcic reading or getting a tarot done! awesome poem ruby."
Posted by haunted on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "I don't know but, the initial part where you talk about poseidon and waters, might be symbolizing the mother's womb, tranquility and safety, and then you talk about the struggle of birth, when ariving to this world, we are taken out of our initial habitat and therefore we struggle to adapt to this new world where everything changes. And i think that all the misery of this world is also implied in there.
Good poem :) "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
- "When I first read, I thought it was about love loss, only then i read what you said, and realise it was about the death of a friend. But isn't friendship a kind of love too? Death is a ghastly business.
I have only read it once, but it seems that you punish yourself about being happy once, as if you felt like you didn't deserve it, so when this tragic accident happened, you felt something crushing on you and thought: what a fool i was to be happy. I don't know, i may be wrong."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "that's a sorrowful and passionate story and a fine tribute to Jose ... dance on , Ruby ... for him , but always for yourself "
Posted by kinkifrog on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "an angel met me with pink roses,that is well enough a thing to hope for. a wonderful string of words. a moving piece as usual."
Posted by MESUN on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
- "This a very beautiful and sad poem at the same time. I’m glad that writhing is your outlet. sharing your pain and joys with other always helps to inspire others to do the same. Keep dancing.
"
Posted by Unknown on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "It is said that dance is man's physical expression of thanks, through the glorification in his own wonderful body and spirit, personified in movement.
Our memories are our own to cherish, and the sharing en masse seems to be some kind of a new age phenomenon perhaps. Courtesy of reality TV perhaps. Well done Ruby, as always, thanks."
Posted by dwells on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "A beautiful poem that asks alot of questions. Why do we perform - on any level? People need to ask themselves what is more real, the performance of emotion and mourning or the real tragedy. Loss itself. Nothing will change it. Brilliant."
Posted by Dominic on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "I've been here before, when a good friend died a few years back. Suddenly everyone knew him, and threw his name around. It really is an odd thing people do, taking situations and exploiting them for their own self-promotion.
That aside, this work is absolutely magnificent! I loved reading it, beginning to end, and will likely read it again in the very near future."
Posted by Fading Poetic on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
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