Comments by All Members
- "this is something done in real detriment to the actor...a self destruction of implied self imagery of a cyclical nature that is absolutely necessary to the actor but looks, or seems like a lack of will to others."
Posted by tonebone on "Rejection of the Fishes" by SnowQueen
- "I pray that you found your happiness.. and someone who really loves you..."
Posted by worm on "Daddy" by SnowQueen
- "Wow. As I was reading this, I was completely speechless. This really does sound like the point of view from either a rapist or his victim. Pretty detailed and all too realistic. But still, pretty good, dude! Wicked touch with the rhyming, too. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Tally" by SnowQueen
- "Good poem :) I would have made the last line stand alone , loose from the rest of the poem for a bit of emphasis but otherwise good job*"
Posted by Unknown on "Lust" by SnowQueen
- "Truly brings out the exact feeling of the act. Perhaps to me it is kind of cold but nevertheless there is heat even in the cold. Good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Illusion of Love" by SnowQueen
- "I dance competitively and can say without a doubt you have captured the feeling I get from dancing to Jazz, NIce work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Late Night Jazz" by SnowQueen
- "It was silent in the room but I could hear Duke's and Lester's sweet tunes... and saw the dancers spinning in excitement and sweet ecstasy...
Thank you for the night jazz,
Pavel
"
Posted by Unknown on "Late Night Jazz" by SnowQueen
- "Hmm very different take on this. Being scorned but laughing in the face of such behavior because you're doing your own thing anyway. I can dig that. Looks like the joke's on the jokers. Very cool."
Posted by Dilated View on "Rejection of the Fishes" by SnowQueen
- "'watched masks of a mother float above her'- priceless. you're good."
Posted by lovechild on "Girl" by SnowQueen
- "all you works are very well writen and they all have great stories behind them like this one.luv it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Girl" by SnowQueen
- "so sad but the poem flowed well.when you write him say pay backs a bitch from chasity punk. "
Posted by Unknown on "Daddy" by SnowQueen
- "this pierced my consciousness like a thousand icicles to realisation. well-written. ~michelle"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Lust" by SnowQueen
- "This was....wow. Reading it was....I dunno, I don't have words for it. Amazing write. -Cinn"
Posted by Cinn on "Rape Tally" by SnowQueen
- "I forgot how much I enjoyed reading your work.. There seems to be this.. strage sort of familiarity I find in your works whenever I stumble across them. I love this.. and I would love to see new work from you too :)"
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Autumn's Betrayal" by SnowQueen
- "wow... although it gave me chills i liked it... its almost too real. the point of view of the rapist. nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Tally" by SnowQueen
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