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Lust
By SnowQueen
A fall
so deep
missed love
fell hard
on lust
broke my neck
paralyzed my heart
relied on the lust
beneath me
slept with the lust
deceived me
trusted the lust
betrayed me
cried over lust
died over lust
turned cold after
falling on the lust
looked over
towards the
missed opportunity
missed target
missed love
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Copyright 2003 SnowQueen
Published on Thursday, April 17, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Lust"
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A former member wrote:
Good poem :) I would have made the last line stand alone , loose from the rest of the poem for a bit of emphasis but otherwise good job*
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On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Niemand
(361)
wrote:
I like this alot!...-Gin
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
well said!!!!!!!!
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
a thin line we walk, it is, between love and lust, I often wonder is it was meant to be bred of both? Awesome piece. Yet again.
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like!
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
whoa. one a thems that sound like you got it bein performed by three or four people in black... its great... -B
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
You have an obvious talent with words, I'm a young writer too.. at least i think *is 16*, but back to the poetry.. keep up the great work ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
this sows a good rhythym of regret and vanity..
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
yes... regret is the knife in our back and vanity the needle in our mind...
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