Rape Tally

By SnowQueen

Kiss me, push your body against mine
Laugh as the young girl in me cries
Force yourself upon me, what your doing is right
Nothing could go wrong, at least it didn’t last night.
Keep up this facade... it’s working for you
Completely ignore every helpless girl that you screw
It’s perfectly normal to steal there virginity!
While you’re at it, why don’t you steal their money?
Creep your dirty hairy hands up their skirts
Fuck each one until they start screaming “THAT HURTS!”
Grin while you push your greasy self deep inside
Every girl is vulnerable: They can run but can’t hide.
Rub your sweaty body hard over each one
Their pain won’t end until your pleasure is done
This is great! Scarring them for life!
You’re doing more damage then you could with a knife!
Quick! Pull out! You can’t leave any evidence!
She’s terrified- the look on her face makes it evident
God that was good... Girl number twenty!
The list goes on, Sonia, Erin, Karen, then Jenny....
mmm...satisfaction... but you’ve only begun!
Look! Right over there! It’s number twenty-one!

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Copyright 2003 SnowQueen
Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow. As I was reading this, I was completely speechless. This really does sound like the point of view from either a rapist or his victim. Pretty detailed and all too realistic. But still, pretty good, dude! Wicked touch with the rhyming, too. =)

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    sick and twisted. truth be told. -kitty

  • Cinn On Friday, May 13, 2005, Cinn (152)By person wrote:

    This was....wow. Reading it was....I dunno, I don't have words for it. Amazing write. -Cinn

  • A former member wrote: wow... although it gave me chills i liked it... its almost too real. the point of view of the rapist. nice.

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully written.. Struck home for me. Well done.

  • A former member wrote: i have no idea what to say. i can relate to this and i know how those girls felt and feel. actually made me cry. amazing thats all i can say, and you captured so much emotion in this poem...wow...

  • JiNx On Friday, November 5, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    umm wow.... makes me think more then I should... nice flow... sad and tragic write... quite good! -JiNx(ie)

  • spaniellie On Thursday, August 19, 2004, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    i dont know what to say. im speechless. honest and painful. great work.

  • Railway_Butterfly On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    This was so painful to read...in all honesty,I can barely think of what to say,but..I couldn't read this without commenting....the harsh reality of the world we live in...my god,does it hurt.....Butterfly..xxx...

  • Beautiful Scars On Monday, April 19, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    oh wow..this made me sick....I was raped, so i know how it feels...YOu are A very talented poet...You express your opinions well..great write. -fairy-

  • girlafraid On Saturday, March 6, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    oh god this was so painful...so much reality...

  • A former member wrote: i think you are one of the greateset writers on this site. awesome job i like ur messages

  • BoldSolitude On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    That was even painful to read, rape is worst than murder in my opinion.

  • A former member wrote: ugh.. I'd rather choose death. Haven't read a "rape poem" in a long time, thanks.

  • spaniellie On Monday, November 24, 2003, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    guys like that are bastards, and we should cut their dicks off... im srry. great write however. much love, *hugs* ~spell

  • A former member wrote: Very well writen. Very touchy subject for me, been there gone through all that you can imagin. In short, loved it. Nara...

  • anathema On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    rape as violence. my heart goes out to this work, and to you.

  • A former member wrote: exeptional piece of work. i enjoyed every word of it ~saint

  • Griffin On Sunday, May 18, 2003, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    like all the other comenters said, nice poem, again i feel bad for u if u were raped

  • A former member wrote: This is probably one of the best poems i have read for awile...its goin on my favorites...keep up the good work~later

  • A former member wrote: damn...you definatly have talent. good job, man. it was like i was there.

  • A former member wrote: A grisly portrait of rape. It was very colorful and made me almost cringe.

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Friday, April 18, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    another wondeful thing wrong with this world, yet you put it in words so perfectly, great job, and yeah a very impressive piece

  • A former member wrote: wow *jaw drops* that woz wikid! i love ur style, ur such a gud poet!!!!!!! keep it up!~L*D*G

  • A former member wrote: full of disgust; very touchy subject to hit on, but you hit it and you hit it well.

  • Stranger On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    Very powerful. Very real.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Very good! You are one talented poet!

  • A former member wrote: Very good writing....brought tears to my eyes.

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