80percent of feeling
By whisperer
A+B 2007-04-23
we are a veil of tragidy as broken as you please
there's noone coming but we are shattered on our knees with no way out
with nothing but a noose keeping us from that long way down blinded by
the smoke
butt of the killing joke
fucking finish us where's the ending stroke you keep talking about inside
conquer and divide split me and let me die
call your angels and let me decide
eyes on my back looking round to discover that the whole world is watching
me drown in an inch of shit where are those eyes i'm fucking sick of this
wearing me down slowly controlling red skies in the morning exhausted just
let me bleed and keep your voice down the fear is only in my mind
wish i could just let out this inside me sweet descention of the killing
kind
the dog hangs itself in its fight for freedom against the tyranny of those
oblivious unless its happy with its own incarceration
stung by the sweet sacrifice
doesnt it feel so nice
in that space between the board and the water is when we decide we really
want to swim
a split second of hangtime dictates our survival
our revival and resurrection or do we sink and die in the relative calm
of blue oblivion
would you pick a bullet or the crushing blue blue oblivion or would you
walk away from us entirely and watch as we die for our conviction on our
restrictions can we fuck it all away
though there's nothing to gain from our intimacy that wasnt already there
before how this saturates our intelligence from the back of eyes we deny
the worlds comprehension of our disease
the shreiks in our heads have shattered the chandelers
over the dinner table and still the world still refuses to believe that
there's anything wrong at all so it just mutes our maddness keeping us
as wounded satellites hoping that ignorance will make it right
b-[the destruction in our wake is those who preached that they understood
the pain, instead of shutting the fuck up long enough to talk about anything
relevent to what we feel]
what the fuck do we mean unless we are dangling off the freshest noose
in front of your biggest window
how do we get this across without killing many people
meaningless words and broken heart shards
b-[keep your status quo, we are becoming the apex of the next Age. Rememeber
this Light Blind "revolution is a fight to the death between the future
and the past" but you will probably just...]
".......forget it"
b-[keeping us in pain, your marianettes, turning blue wantingly with our
own umbilical cords; hey it beats having to clean up your messes, rebuild
your bridges, tape back the ashes of your life you wish you had.]
posted by the whisperer thanks in large part to the inspiration of master
rafe
thank you brother-
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Comments on "80percent of feeling"
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
A tragic heart-trail. remarkable read.
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On Friday, April 27, 2007, unspeakable truth
(94) wrote:
From the "would you pick a bullet, to hoping that ignorance will make it right" such truth, and very powerful words. Excellent write. Made to much sense in my head.
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On Friday, April 27, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
a seriously unruly read, one that seems to be pulling away from your temporary hold on it ... with some killer lines tricking you into thinking you've got it under control... you've got the craze staic -
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On Friday, April 27, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
STATIC - on ten here .. and it's clear ... so clear .. and this showed me some things i never looked at before, always a huge plus ... thanks man ... great piece of work ... funguy