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i dream of suicide
By Bloodofdeadpoets
Neatly place the knife into my chest to end all my woes
Now gently twist the blade so the wound won’t close
Damn this hurts like that of a thousand deadly blows
I feel my strength leaving me as my blood steadily flows
I push it in a little deeper just to see how far it goes
And think about how my death will delight all my foes
Suddenly I’m awakened by the sound of soulless crows
To continue this hollow life filled with deep sorrows
The reason I dream of suicide only my demon knows
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Tuesday, April 15, 2003.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, mywristshurt
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wrote:
awesome awesome awesome awesome.. i fucking loved it
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A former member wrote:
written so well, i like the flow, and the imagry.can relate to topic...
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On Monday, March 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
i know how that can be....nice write.
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On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
an internal wish.....manifested with beautiful words........well done..........urban
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A former member wrote:
i liked it a lot... its something that everybody feels, but most don't admit to.
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A former member wrote:
Captured the sentiments of suicide perfectly. Dark but beautiful. ~Christen~
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A former member wrote:
Great write!! I loved it.
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A former member wrote:
good! keep the poems comming..!
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A former member wrote:
fuck!loved it!
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A former member wrote:
Nice and short that explains suicide very well.
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A former member wrote:
thats very dark and very deep yet very thrilling and astounding work keep it up
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