Defy my Master (this puppet has cut his strings)
By Thorn
"I'm done with this game"
These words said, and I am free
Free from the grip of a subtle puppet master
Pulling strings from behind a pretty face
I am my own person
No one can bind me
I am a free spirit
I'll do what I please
Words cannot harm me
I know what I am
I know where I stand
Say what you will
I will not be moved
I know what I want
To that, I'll stay true
No more "Please forgive me."
No more "Master, may I?"
No more chains and cages
This bird
Has got
To fly
No more double-standards
No more clipped wings
No more submission
This puppet
Has cut
His strings
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© 2006 Thorn
Published on Sunday, October 15, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, September 8, 2007, serotonin lost
(140) wrote:
defiance is the only happiness to be found in servatude
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On Wednesday, November 1, 2006, thornyrose
(23) wrote:
i've been gone for a while...tis good to come back and see such raw expression..keep up the great writes.
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A former member wrote:
you did a good job with this one, just like all the others... and yeah you know the rest. :)
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
this is beautiful, Jet, as you say, you weren;t born to be held down...thisis lovely, I can't say enough of how this makes me feel...
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Incredible, the power and strength that rised into the ending. As the world falls apart for you to newly discover everything beautiful. Kind of the feel I got from this ~Gothic
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
That is fucking great. You never were built for strings. I'm glad they're gone.
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
So am I, Bunny. So am I.
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A former member wrote:
YAY for the strong spirited soul who refuses to be enslaved by any other!!! very well done Thorn, I'll chant this as my prayer tonight....~RAIN~
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
I'm honored :)
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On Sunday, October 15, 2006, Irioth
(7) wrote:
Ah, good poem. Really easy to relate to.
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A former member wrote:
Wow! I liked it. I can be put forth to just about anything. and mean it to just about anyone. Nicely written
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On Sunday, October 15, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
It's a bit rough around the edges, but I was suddenly inspired. The result: a raw expression of emotion.
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
that seems to happen alot with you...;-)