Let My Rage Explode Out Of My Pen Onto My Paper Of Revenge

By l mo

My vision is blurred
My speech is slurred
As I walk down these empty streets of the night

I cannot think straight
As I stop here and wait
As I stop here and think about this horrible night

My love cast me aside
Left me as I cried
As I watched him walk from these empty streets of the night

Left me here broken
No words have I spoken
Since my love cast me down these empty streets of the night

I walk past the Temple of the Gods
And I put on my fake façade
As I walk down these empty streets of the night

I bow my head and pray
That over time I'll be okay
As I walk down these empty streets of the night

Not one sound is heard
When it finally occurred
As I smile and walked these empty streets of the night

A chill runs down my spine
As I give off a sign
That never again shall he walk down these empty streets of the night

He tore me apart
Ripped out my heart
But I still walk down these empty streets of the night

I'll return the favor
And his pain I shall savor
As I drag his body along these empty streets of the night


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© 2006 german kitten
Published on Monday, September 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: very nice, the way that you repeat the same line over again but change it just a little was good, kept it from getting repetitive. I like the last line the best, Lord knows I felt that way about my husband enough times before we got married! *~`burned`~*

  • SilentStalker On Monday, September 25, 2006, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...sweet; did I just see violent rage put on paper...? if you weren't underage, I'd say that gave me a woody...but I guess I'll have to settle with a smile for now... :) Scholar

  • l mo On Sunday, November 26, 2006, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    aw, thanks dar ^__^


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