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And now.. a love poem
By Bluegirl
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
And we're swirling
Hands Clasped together
-Dip-
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
Floating on air
Music in tune
With the beat of your heart
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
Chanelling steps
Through your loving eyes
To mine
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
And at this moment,
Nothing else matters.
~I love you~
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© 2006 Bluegirl
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, urbanhumility
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wrote:
your combination works magicly here, your economy of words speak volumes.......well done.............urban
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A former member wrote:
1, 2, 3... 1, 2, 3... A beautiful poetic waltz... Dance on...
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On Monday, September 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
*sighs* I loved this the 1-2-3 was my heartbeat as you cascaded me into a dance of love and surreal passion, I floated on heavens clouds swirling in a lovers arms dreaming dreams that were beyond beauty~Gothic
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On Monday, September 25, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
I was singing it as I read it... so the effect you wanted to portray worked! This is beautiful and brilliant! Love it. Julia~
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A former member wrote:
"And at this moment, Nothing else matters." To be wrapped up in that minute, when the world has never been more bright and your heart has never felt so full..I'm fighting my way back to that feeling even now. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
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