The Edge

By liquid_emotion


I’m aching and I’m shaking
And I’m down on bended knees
And I’m praying and I’m begging
And I’m screaming help me please

The winds blowing and it’s raining
And I’m shaking on my knees
And I’m cold and I’m lonely
And I’m aching for release

I’m waiting and I’m watching
And I’m begging on my knees
And I’m yearning and I’m hurting
And I’m filled with this disease

The winds resting the rains dripping
And I’m sobbing on my knees
And I’m learning and I’m coping
And I’m long passed asking please

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Friday, April 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This one I like alot. Like everyone else has already said works on many levels....alot like music. You are very talented. Thanks for sharing.

  • maddin foxxxy On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    this is painful...reminds me what i carry inside..so well expressed though.

  • A former member wrote: i've read this a few times, and each time i can just shake my head at the overwhelming, overcoming of pain. very good write, thanks for sharing

  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    beautiful... sad... hopeless... i feel these words, and i find it funny how you seem to be able to capture them in the same form they are in my mind... strange...

  • A former member wrote: I love the mystery behind this and a lot of your poems. It flows nicely, and it describes exactly what you want it to describe, but does not give away what it is you are describing. good stuff. :)

  • liquid_emotion On Saturday, April 5, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    oh yes, I'm quite the mystery :^P *laugh*

  • Armand On Friday, April 4, 2003, Armand (57)By person wrote:

    read this one several times trying to figure out the motivation... physical malady... mental anguish... broken heart... works on all levels and that is the beauty of this piece. well done.

  • diavolessa On Friday, April 4, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    i find this to be percfect i really liked the way of fllowed! it just made me connect to it! :) ~laterz

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    thnks... perfection...wow

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Friday, April 4, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Very good poem! It flowed so well! Keep writing! :)

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