Siamese twins

By liquid_emotion

The power of forgiveness lives inside
Inspiring difference and changing lives
Altering perceptions through clouded eyes
Lifting the heaviness from tired minds
And relief floods in with perfect time

But is forgiveness all it takes
Or will sleeping dogs lie awake
One eye open on higher stakes
Another wrong awaiting its make
While kindness and mercy give double takes

I cannot forget and it’s not over yet
Outcomes unknown with my emotions on loan
These thoughts never last and views change too fast
I get it just when it all changes again
And doesn’t it figure you can never be sure

So the power of forgiveness lives inside
Trapped by the conflicts in our lives
Altering perceptions through clouded eyes
Tormenting our already weary minds
A conflict of thoughts through all of time

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Tuesday, April 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    excellent writing

  • A former member wrote: Another brilliant write. I was worried you were gunna stay on hiatus for awhile. Bravo. :)

  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 2, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    the line jane singled out is by far my favourite in this perfect piece. so weary, so tired... and it's so painfully easy... hmmm...

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 2, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    geez.. you got it all right... scary.

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, April 2, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    WOW, they are both right. That is defiantly the bets line in the poem, all in all it was perfect. two thumbs up matter of fact. ~gothic~

  • cre On Wednesday, April 2, 2003, cre (410)By person wrote:

    I *love* this!! GREAT job! My favorite line is: "But is forgiveness all it takes Or will sleeping dogs lie awake". Really excellent write -- waiting for some new ones by you was worth it!

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