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By mywristshurt
05-12-06
I'm burning all these memories
I'm burning all these tears.
I'm burning all these hopeless thoughts
That I've had for so many years.
I'm burning all the dreams
I'm burning all the lies.
I'm burning everything
That stays stuck inside.
I'm burning all this slutishness
That my dad has said I was forever.
I'm burning all this hornyness
So those actions won't go with me where ever
I'm burning what I don't have
Then I'm burning some more.
I'm burning down myself
I'm burning down what you called a whore.
I'm burning all that's broken,
I'm burning what you can't mend.
I'm burning till i'm choking,
I'm burning until the end.
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© 2006 TheWhimperedRose
Published on Wednesday, May 17, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Nice flow. You have a perfect meter. Plus it is nice and concise. Good job.
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On Friday, May 19, 2006, Any
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wrote:
Keep it burning. If there are enough true tears left they'll make it stop.
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was powerful and it made me want to burn somethings too! I loved it and how you were renewing yourself
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Cattarax
(216) wrote:
WOW ... If I could do this I might actually be a happy person half the time ... good luck on that ... and if it doesnt work I am here ... excellent read :)
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Ozymandias
(30) wrote:
Wow. Powerful writing, Full of anger and pain. Wonderful work you've done here.
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