A collection of shorts (thats not a title)

By Clementine

1)

Just yesterday there was a bird
call above
the city, and it calmed and coalesced the masses.

2)

Cigarette fossils
against the lips of the girl
whose laying in the street.

3)

Rethink everything:
Alone in the dark forest
are the great talkers

4)

I am trapped in hell
the dark night of womankind
counting my fingers

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© 2006 Clementine
Published on Saturday, May 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A_Puppet_Show On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    The bird dosnt talk in the forest, but that dosnt matter cous you see the fallen girl even in the forest(or see her only away from the bird?) and is in hell becouse of it. She will rip your nails off. 4 bam, maybe 1 big explosion. Tiger

  • A_Puppet_Show On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    ...the shorts ... perfect! Vacation shorts used in the forest where you see things in a diffrent way, or where you use the shorts. I hate vacation for this reason, time and landscape = gateway to hell O_o A collection of hellish trips. My view of it. Tige

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    this comically conical comet commands comment: your mom is the dark knight of womankind, or the loose one

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    Hooray for confusion! Anyway, must get round to writing a Haiku one day. Good work though.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I liked em all. But the 4th one took away my pointless hat

  • AniDayz On Saturday, May 13, 2006, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    excellent collection of haiku formats...all are spoken wonderfuly well, touching such depth with such few words.

  • Any On Saturday, May 13, 2006, Any (39)By person wrote:

    Nice, really nice. Especially the 4th one

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