külkedisi

By inexperienced

the old pictures.
'old'
as it stayed in The past.
My eyes were purely wet,
bursting out joyfully.
when the time came,
00.00 it was,
and my car would turn into a pumpkin.
and you knew it
that I had a pumpkin actually
still you were with me then.
...
it's funny though
all you believe is scorched
turning you into ashes, there, at that moment
suddenly
you try to recreate yourself,
your silhouette.
the more you burn
the more you wither
if only I disappeared with the first
sparklet.

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Published on Sunday, May 7, 2006. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "külkedisi"

On Sunday, July 8, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

***=)*** Shines and spins, spins and shines. Fantabulous. -Carl
On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, Morbid_insanity (74) wrote:

that was moving. "if only I disappeared with the sparklet". So much power in a poem so short. Nice write
On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, blue (1409) wrote:

What a wonderful write! This unfolded beautifully; each line supporting and sustaining the rest. And damn, what an ending! Great stuff going on here. Welcome to DP. ~b
On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, PoeticHellion (191) wrote:

Brilliantly beautiful. The flow just... works perfectly.
On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

This has such elegance to it. You just wanna keep reading it, again and again. Awesome, truly. Julia~
On Monday, May 8, 2006, Anth (1126) wrote:

I cant remember the music of that moment in the film, but imagine it was something hurried and anxious
On Monday, May 8, 2006, Anth (1126) wrote:

this built in such manner and accumulated into vanishing traces,from a storm to trickles of rain. a stranger by morning. im not making much sense. just that i was engulfed by this poem
On Monday, May 8, 2006, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

this was exquisite. post more.
A former member wrote: burn me please! nice... hey! welcome to dp... ;)
A former member wrote: "suddenly you try to recreate yourself, your silhouette. the more you burn the more you wither" this was magical..absolutely beautiful, smearing in front of my eyes in a lovely palette. wonderful write, and welcome to dp.
On Monday, May 8, 2006, inexperienced (26) wrote:

thanks a lot for your sincere support which took away my fear of being an outcast. and thanks for 'listening'; it is wonderful to be heard and comprehended.
A former member wrote: I can't begin to tell you how this has worked over my mind and heart.. severely provocative, the blurry sort of tragic. This is amazing. Welcome to DarkPoetry.
On Sunday, May 7, 2006, mywristshurt (405) wrote:

beautiful.this was very.. i don't know the words