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Jumping Off This Bridge
By mywristshurt
04-08-06
Here I go,
No body is here to stop me.
Good-bye cruel world,
Im forever lost at your sea.
You won with your evil intentions.
I lost by being manipulated.
I'm going to be stuck in a child-like detention,
If I don't get out of here.
I'm holding unto the pole,
That connects the bridge together.
I look down very slow,
At the icy water I will enter.
A tear falls down my cheek,
As I say so long forever.
If only this life weren't so bleak
I would be staying longer.
Here I go,
Jumping off this bridge.
I look down very slow,
At the life I used to live.
The water has me surrounded
I lost by being manipulated.
If I never jumped off this bridge,
I would be staying longer.
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© 2006 TheWhimperedRose
Published on Friday, April 14, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Jumping Off This Bridge"
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A former member wrote:
this floored myheart to the ground. stopped breathing for a sec. as i read every line. nicely done. ~ red
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, mywristshurt
(408)
wrote:
well its nice to know that some people like my writing.. thanks for the comments
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On Monday, May 8, 2006, stuckinneutral_09
(9) wrote:
I LOVE IT!
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A former member wrote:
This is so freekin tear jerking!! i love it with a passion!!!
ur really good at poetry!!
(:)chelsey(:)
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
Sad..and lovely
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, heart broken suicide
(18) wrote:
knowing that the water was cold would have stopped me...but i reallly love this it says a lot
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On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This just fryed my heart, and pulled at it's strings wanting to catch the jumper
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