Fuck shakespeare, he makes me look bad
By Vicious Pixie
shall i compare thee...
nevermind, it's been done
fuck shakespeare and his iambic pentameter
my paltry phrases could never measure up
stuck at work
forever away from you
"baby, i feel you pulling me like a magnet.."
truer words were never uttered
damn you east coast stylee boys
and your suave and charming powers
*does the hall know that you use them for evil?*
nothing to write
yet here i am writing
imagining us camped out on a bed
in a sub par motel
cross legged, face to face
shot-gunning that sweet blue smoke
fuck
baby
i could sure use a drink
and a night of good lovin'
in your sweet-talkin' arms
bet you never thought you'd make a bitch like me blush
so now what to say?
ask me anything
and i'll tell you everything
all of my secrets
all of my fears
it's easier when i can't see your face
or read your reactions
did i tell you today
that i love the way...
nevermind
fuck rhyme
too structured...who needs it?
not us
nothing structured happening here
just a lot of free-fall
just one question:
doesthisfeelrushed?
it should
but it doesn't
is that wierd?
oh well...who cares?
not i
not about anything but you
and that smoky burboun and cigarette rockstar voice of yours
and when i get to hear it next
so now.. i've said it all
but mostly nothing
how many ways can you say three little words?
not enough baby, not enough.
Comments on "Fuck shakespeare, he makes me look bad"
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On Monday, June 8, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1705) wrote:
"nothing structured happening here just a lot of free-fall" - holy cow, I loved this piece, all chock full of phrases like this! I could hear this being read in a husky voice, gravelly with whiskey and smoke, tired, cynical, dead-pan humorous. The title fit this perfectly. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Inspiring. ;)
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On Friday, March 17, 2006, Alanarchy
(1201) wrote:
Andie, what can I say. Absolutely outstanding. You fill me up, babe. Can't get enough of you, though. Luv ya.
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On Friday, March 17, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
holy hell, I love this .. superb ~V
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A former member wrote:
free fall ramble alright. and shakespeare is the most over-rated writer in history, damn i hate his phrasing :P
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On Friday, March 17, 2006, Drea
(1443) wrote:
Damn! I had to read this a few times. Each time all I could say was..."Damn". So, damn it is.