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You know who you are (Yea, right)
By veingo
An old friend
(Term used so loosely, I had
to scoop it up off the ground)
I told you,
You can't trust someone, who won't trust anyone.
You should have listened.
Same age, same story, same situation.
We should have a lot in common.
But, while I was living life, you were avoiding it.
(One of those "some things" that never changes)
So we meet again, and I try again, And again, you disappoint.
We are alike, in so many ways,
yet you are miles behind.
Want to know what I've learned Kid?
Fuck you!
Get your own answers!
Yes, I'll cry you a river, but you'll
have to bleed one first.
(And to think,
yesterday, I was feeling old)
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© 2006 veingo
Published on Tuesday, March 14, 2006.
Filed under: "Rage" and
Comments on "You know who you are (Yea, right)"
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On Monday, April 17, 2006, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
shit man, that hit me like a brick wall. that was raw and true. excellent, fucking excellent.
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A former member wrote:
"Want to know what I've learned Kid? Fuck you! Get your own answers!"--so true, so true. learn for yourself and begin to understand the way you understand things. this is a great write, Ron.
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On Friday, March 31, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
I am sated. Thanks man. =) ~b
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Err0r
(365) wrote:
So true. I think the best thing about you is when I can't feel anything, you bring this fire out of me. :D Thank you V.
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A former member wrote:
like being tucked in delicately... nighty nightshade, hades' style. .. transcendiary, taught; with teeth that dragged every word down the page.skin. .. .visceral write
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On Friday, March 24, 2006, Dei
(665) wrote:
This is very edgy. I like the perspective.
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
WOW is right...You've come back*Tackles with hugs* that was awesome Ron
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
WOW! I loved how you fooled him into thinking you were going to say. I agree, he should learn on his own. We work hard for our own "getting it", he should work for his as well! Awesome piece V. You rock hun! Julia~
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A former member wrote:
That second line is killer. This digs the truth out of a cankerous reunion and spits it into the other's face... "fuck you! Get your own answers!" haha, nice!
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On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(62) wrote:
An old friend (Term used so loosely, I had to scoop it up off the ground) love the imagery....fantastic
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A former member wrote:
oooooh V, how you've struck a chord within me that I so recently found myself humming the notes of. Glass pointed out my own fave lines, so I'll not be repeating them. Wonderful piece. I love it as well. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
"Yes, I'll cry you a river, but you'll
have to bleed one first."- i loved that...way to twist something unique..this was very fast paced, but i really liked that quality. "while i was living life, you were avoiding it" touche! i love it!
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