You know who you are (Yea, right)

By veingo

An old friend

(Term used so loosely, I had
to scoop it up off the ground)


I told you,

You can't trust someone, who won't trust anyone.

You should have listened.


Same age, same story, same situation.

We should have a lot in common.

But, while I was living life, you were avoiding it.


(One of those "some things" that never changes)


So we meet again, and I try again, And again, you disappoint.


We are alike, in so many ways,
yet you are miles behind.


Want to know what I've learned Kid?

Fuck you!
Get your own answers!


Yes, I'll cry you a river, but you'll
have to bleed one first.


(And to think,
yesterday, I was feeling old)


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© 2006 veingo
Published on Tuesday, March 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Rage" and
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Comments on "You know who you are (Yea, right)"

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  • MESUN On Monday, April 17, 2006, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    shit man, that hit me like a brick wall. that was raw and true. excellent, fucking excellent.

  • A former member wrote: "Want to know what I've learned Kid? Fuck you! Get your own answers!"--so true, so true. learn for yourself and begin to understand the way you understand things. this is a great write, Ron.

  • blue On Friday, March 31, 2006, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I am sated. Thanks man. =) ~b

  • Err0r On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    So true. I think the best thing about you is when I can't feel anything, you bring this fire out of me. :D Thank you V.

  • A former member wrote: like being tucked in delicately... nighty nightshade, hades' style. .. transcendiary, taught; with teeth that dragged every word down the page.skin. .. .visceral write

  • Dei On Friday, March 24, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    This is very edgy. I like the perspective.

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    WOW is right...You've come back*Tackles with hugs* that was awesome Ron

  • TaintedButterfly On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    WOW! I loved how you fooled him into thinking you were going to say. I agree, he should learn on his own. We work hard for our own "getting it", he should work for his as well! Awesome piece V. You rock hun! Julia~

  • A former member wrote: That second line is killer. This digs the truth out of a cankerous reunion and spits it into the other's face... "fuck you! Get your own answers!" haha, nice!

  • Vicious Pixie On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, Vicious Pixie (58)By person wrote:

    An old friend (Term used so loosely, I had to scoop it up off the ground) love the imagery....fantastic

  • A former member wrote: oooooh V, how you've struck a chord within me that I so recently found myself humming the notes of. Glass pointed out my own fave lines, so I'll not be repeating them. Wonderful piece. I love it as well. *Evangel*

  • A former member wrote: "Yes, I'll cry you a river, but you'll have to bleed one first."- i loved that...way to twist something unique..this was very fast paced, but i really liked that quality. "while i was living life, you were avoiding it" touche! i love it!


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