language of rage
By whisperer
intsall...
syntex set...
run SETUP.EXE...
break right
turn left
breathe
swing once...duck back
breathe
i stepped into a dream once...
analog space continued into real time streaming before time pendulum swung
twice and space
vices lost three at a time
i want to blink...
but the program wont let me
walls of numbers
like the glass ones of reality
where everyone is bedazzled by faceted stones
strange broken...slick
ingenious in fact
slave out the one who has nothing upstairs because he'll do it anyway
break the faith
breathe
two guns
-B.A.C. LEVEL POINT TWO SEVEN NINE-
breathe
one ton of info...and you have no where
to go
break me
if i knew how to beg i might start on my knees
but i'm breaking my teeth on these fuckin walls of naked glass
torturing myself with thoughts
breathe
they told me to go get my ass kicked
when i blinked there were two men on the ground
i'm bleeding
breathe
turn out the lights
break silence and pray for me
i'm the mark not the gunner
just remember
you can't kill what you can't see
-contact lost-
Comments on "language of rage"
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A former member wrote:
This is fucking pumped..like running fast into a brick wall.. over and over again. Your words always catch me off guard and stumbling, by intensity alone..you think I'd be somewhat less bewildered by now, but it's quite the contrary..
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A former member wrote:
Each time, it's more real because, in indulging your works, it's like re-opening the scab/gnawing on an old wound..those kind of cuts only words can have made..and I guess I ignore it most of the time..but things like this.. make it throb.
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A former member wrote:
I admire you.. for so many reasons.. but the burning power in this..its blatancy.. it overwhelms me.. and near brings me to tears..because words like this fuel something in me. .."just remember/you can't kill what you see".. fucking dammit, Alex.
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A former member wrote:
In all that babble, I think what I was trying to say was.. you made lost and found not only relative, but synonymous.. and I thank you for that..because too many hide.
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A former member wrote:
Woah...this definately threw me through a loop of venomous words and angry visions. The imagery you've conveyed here fits perfectly with your title...this is wonderful. *Evangel*