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The scent of you Lingers
By Spyral
What I would give,
For the feel of your hand
The caress of your lips.
To fall asleep wrapped in your arms
As the beat of our hearts,
Softly, gentily lulls us to sleep.
The scent of you lingers
stuck to my pillowcase
The only trace of you left behind.
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© 2006 Spyral
Published on Sunday, February 19, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
"The scent of you lingers/stuck to my pillowcase/The only trace of you left behind." Yes, to have something always there to remind you of the love you once lived is, although painful, a beautiful thing as well. Wonderful write. *Evangel*
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, BlackBear
(12)
wrote:
A scent, the trace of him or her; not the remembered sight or touch, but something real, a part of them that is actually HERE, what a joyous thing! This was loveley. - Michael
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A former member wrote:
Love It Nice Write....
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this could be taken two ways... i chose the hinted grin and dreamy sigh tone... lovely
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A former member wrote:
I Love the Visual here spyral. fantastic.
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A former member wrote:
...A scent evokes a memory... I think we've all been there. Nicely drafted.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
....completely speechless, i am........
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A former member wrote:
It's amazing how strong sent can be. Very well described.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
i use to smell that on my pillow too, the trick is to wash it! but this was beautifully, soft, sensual and lonely...relatable...it is no good to wallow in our despair...it can consume us...like it almost did me...lovely write -=ak=-
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