moment of surrender

By missanthropic

she sits on a worn wooden bench,
in a nondescript shopping center
white hair lifted by the breeze into the sky…
from below it appears as pure white strands of light
brown eyes shaded by lowered eyelids
facing up towards the warmth of an afternoon sun
inhaling deeply and humming to herself quietly
the whirling world darting into sandwich shops
and back to the office, never once noticing
the ageless beauty’s moment of surrender

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© 2006 missanthropic
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Saturday, January 28, 2006, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Absolutely stunning. Please do keep posting, and I'll be reading the ones that I've missed. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: Right on. I love desriptive pieces like this. A world of views in so few words. Good job

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