[your permanence]

By doll on the rag

let's rejoice
let's shake it up
turn the volume up loud

let's be you and me
all happiness
and pure dumb
amazement
at how fucking alive we are
today

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

let's be magic
let's not waste
any more time
let's let go of those former stupidities
(well really that one's just for me but you knew that)

hey

let's be lovers

and since we've already got that

hey

let's just be friends
let's just be anything except unimportant
to one another

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

cause i really think
i'm finally coming into my own these days

yeah

and ain't that a trip
?

let's be sincere
let's be fiercefully forgiving

let's reminisce
about the [billion] tomorrows
coming our way

let's not breathe for a moment

cause in that silence hangs
all our better understanding

and

i wanna CELEBRATE
your permanence

take your ink from my pages
and weave my skin with it

we'll call it "the living chapter"

and you'll be

flesh of my flesh
blood of my blood

yeah

flesh of my flesh

and

blood of my blood

let's be lovely
let's be lovely
let's be lovely
(you're lovely)

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Published on Saturday, January 7, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "[your permanence]"

On Wednesday, December 6, 2017, Cassette (1087) wrote:

oh doll, i forgot how much i loved your writing.
On Thursday, January 12, 2006, not an addict (45) wrote:

now you just gotta let me know when you aren't afraid to sing it, mhmm.
On Friday, January 13, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

you'll be the first to know, dear... (well, second after me.) i just have to get the alanis-voice in my head to stop singing it.
On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

kinda scary version of " happy together" by the turtles .. certainly more intense .. got a charge out of this ... heavy vibe damn convincing ... funguy
On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

i happen to love that song, so that's quite a compliment. =) thanks, love.
On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

Wow. Crippling but yet sweet, in a weird way. This is sheer genius. Awesome, I can't say more. Julia~
On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

they say the crippling thing subsides after a few minutes. it's really just that your foot's fallen asleep. you can walk it off, no worries. =)
A former member wrote: "i wanna CELEBRATE your permanence take your ink from my pages and weave my skin with it" god, i think i'm in love with you too.
On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

you ladies will just have to duke it out, i'm afraid. =/
A former member wrote: This was a complete trip.. not so much the colorization, but the words themselves.. they were like a really strong euphoric stimulation with an amazing letdown.. spinning and gorgeous.
A former member wrote: !!! These words are stumbling from my fingertips like ackward silences.. I love this and you..all I can say. You are the personification of exquisite. ~Me(at your feet)~
A former member wrote: heh, knight just told me to read this. most awesome work indeed.
On Saturday, January 7, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

ooh, i've got promotion. neat! ^^ thanks for listening to him.
On Saturday, January 7, 2006, knightmirror (426) wrote:

*standing ovation*.....very nice....very nice indeed....i really enjoyed this.....beautiful write and display of emotions.....if i could add this to my faves i would....but since i can't i hope you accept this *standing ovation*....knight
On Saturday, January 7, 2006, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

thanks, sweet. =) standing ovations are warmly recieved. hee.