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By Myrrhkuri the fallen one
So young, so fair
yet full of despair.
What is wrong?
Why don't you care?
You're beautiful, I'm sure
yet so insecure.
are you sick?
Is there a cure?
your eyes, your hair
you're compliment impaired.
All I can do,
is show you I care.
Believe, in you,
it's not hard to do.
If you could just see you,
the way that I do.
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© 2005 Myrrhkuri the fallen one
Published on Wednesday, December 7, 2005.
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65)
wrote:
wonderful piece..i have felt this feelin about myself in the past..good write! tank you for sharing ^^
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, Cetra
(16) wrote:
dam good write. feel the same way for this girl, which is what i mostly write about.
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
....beautiful...
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
Now this is beautiful, I've known people like this in my lifetime.
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A former member wrote:
I really like it, it shows you really care, everyone needs a friend like you
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, Adam
(242) wrote:
nice, i like this poem, it fits so many people i know (including me sometimes)
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, wandering druid
(78) wrote:
A poem for everyone who cares for another, and a poem for those who cannot believe in themselves. Excellent work.
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, Crimson Shade
(92) wrote:
Brilliant... reminds me of a few friends who cant believe in themselves.
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