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No reason. Part 2
By veingo
I tried to make you love me.
To be the perfect man.
I tried so hard to be all that you need.
I tried to make you love me.
To make you understand.
That you were all the world and more, to me.
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(A magical feeling.)
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I wanted nothing more,
than to be with you.
than to serve you.
to provide for you.
to worship you.
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( A magical failing)
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You called me,
simple.
without ambition.
content.
a coward.
I guess I'm not enough.
I guess I've failed again.
I guess I'll never be the one for you.
But don't stop reading yet.
Come back again, my pretty.
I think I have one more poem for you.
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© 2005 veingo
Published on Friday, October 28, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "No reason. Part 2"
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On Sunday, March 15, 2009, CjPsychotic
(30)
wrote:
for a piece so immensely filled with deep emotions, it drops just short of bland. Excuse the harshness but it seems to me that cold-bitterness and just plain dryness are radically different.
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A former member wrote:
This is excellent. I'm digging it. Not just the cliffhanger, this whole thing was good. Can't wait for the next.
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94) wrote:
you are beyond words!!I'd loved to have met you early in my troubled life!
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A former member wrote:
I'd come back, but then again, write or read your words, your heart and soul out like this to me, and I would never leave WOW.. you take my breath away ^V^, ...~A~
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A former member wrote:
i love the contrast between part one and part two..but i must say, i think i liked this one the best..it's filled with a bitter that chills my bones. the ending was perf. i can't wait for part three. =)
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On Thursday, November 10, 2005, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
Man, I like this better than Part 1 I think. "Come back again, my pretty. I think I have one more poem for you." Man oh man, that's hot. I love it, dah'lin.
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On Thursday, November 10, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Hehe, stick around if you really want to here un-nice things. There will be a part 3.
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On Friday, November 11, 2005, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
Utoh. That almost scares me. I like to hear nice things! But to hear something unkind from you...is worth waiting for.
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A former member wrote:
such convincing desperation; [i'd come back :)] i love the inner trappings of rhyme and reasoning in this. .. ~ness
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On Saturday, October 29, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Without rhyme, or reason, what would a poet have? ^V^
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