Repulsion Expulsion

By Lotophagi

I
am
repulsed
so much by
myself
that
I
feel
sickened
when you say
I
am
beautiful.

Nausea
is never
so intense
as when it is
directed
at ones
self.

You
make
me sick
to the
core.

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Published on Friday, September 30, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Repulsion Expulsion"

A former member wrote: i can relate
On Saturday, April 14, 2007, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

people are sick....~*dani*~, loved the write, so blunt, strait to the point
On Thursday, October 13, 2005, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

wow, this was like being slapped with a 2x4, intense and loathsome but it touched off a wave of sadness....well done
On Thursday, October 13, 2005, stuart_pid (135) wrote:

good god, this is hardcore. powerful and sad and so many things at once in spite of its length. to evoke such an explosion of emotions with such few words... this is a towering testament to your talent.
On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Err0r (358) wrote:

Theres nothing I could think of as a compliment to match this wonderful poem. So I'll just say nice write.
On Saturday, October 1, 2005, ApathysKiss (377) wrote:

heh i know this feeling, i wrote something about this and it's an annoying feeling to have to doubt yourself...this is delivered more bluntly...~m~
On Friday, September 30, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

ahk! this certainly leaves nothing to obscurity... like a heavy-weight uppercut BAM! this hit hard.. knock out. ~b
On Saturday, October 1, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (79) wrote:

Blue,your comment made me feel like i was playing old school street fighter.But as for the piece,it is short and to the point,i know this feeling all too well.This actually made my stomach turn.