street fighter
By doll on the rag
let's go at it
right now
brass knuckles and everything:
better buckle up
and knuckle down for the fight
i'll give you a bloody lip
if you promise to kiss me with it later
and not flinch
don't fool yourself--
i'm not pulling any punches
i want you to shatter my glass jaw
(to match my heart)
no switchblade surgeon quite like you
with your deft left-handed precision
in incision-making
a heavy-lidded hard-hitter
holding back with closed fists
insult me with the insincerity
of these injuries
don't hide your eyes
like you didn't want them blackened;
you and i both knew
the gloves had to come off
some time
i like it best
in the back alleys
where wet gravel and city pollution
soil my knees
where brick-walled corners
wait to receive you
where the sickening thud
of fist to face
echoes off street signs
you're nobody's baby here
we're glitteringwet
against bottle shards and garbage,
our false-star hopes
reflected in neon raindrops
i'll give you two minutes
to wipe your face clean
to catch up with your heart
to breathe
but then you've got to start hitting back
Comments on "street fighter"
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
ahhh, the random button, I saw your name and was like, alright, here we go...as usual, you delivered with a flawless glace that seems to follow you where ever your words may go... I've felt this so many times... lovely. :)
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A former member wrote:
your descriptions are untouchable; absolutely perfect. your writing is such a masterpiece. ....samone
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A former member wrote:
"i'll give you a bloody lip
if you promise to kiss me with it later
and not flinch " ... i love it.
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A former member wrote:
...Jesus. This was raw, powerful and refreshing. Not what I was expecting and I'm pleasantly surprised. Awsome. ~Ship!
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On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
This.. is awesome. I thought the line "i'll give you a bloody lip if you promise to kiss me with it later and not flinch" was incredible enough, but the very last one gave it that almighty punch. Wonderfully unique.
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A former member wrote:
For a lack of better, more entertaining words due to sleep deprivation..... this is the shit. and not that watery, goopy shit; this is a hefty sized, break in in two to flush it down type of shit.
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On Thursday, September 29, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
waaah! *runs off in search of a baseball bat or similar blunt object* "Backup! I need backup!"
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On Thursday, September 29, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
no, you need a spine. start there. =)
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
jesus, dollface. I'm going to come back to this. damn.
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Dear God...you. I think I know that you're amazing, then you knock me flat, and show me that amazing doesn't cut it. These words, babe. I've said it before, but you destroy me in the most beautiful of ways.
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, not an addict
(45) wrote:
by the gods girl... i've been inside your head for years now and you still manage to come completely out of left field. (well, except the bloody lip comment) =) i'm completely addicted to your rapidfire posts... they make my day every damn day