Control

By l mo

Many mistakes you have made in your life
You smoked pot and
You cut and
You always fought

You said you loved me
Then you left me
But you didn't know
How big a mistake that would be

We were happy together
Deeply in love
Caught up in the moment
To good to be true

You left me
Stupid idea
Now things are bad for you
You're losing things that are dear

What you don't understand
Is that I have control
Over your body and mind
I own your whole soul

Control over nature
And animals, too
Over seas and the the wind
And over you

Dark skies surround you
And fill you with fear
And now you are wishing
That I was still here....

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Copyright 2005 night_sky
Published on Sunday, August 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • abattoir On Monday, August 29, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    very defined...control...you wrap it all up.hard to do with such a word.very nice job

  • Doc On Sunday, August 28, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    Well done


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