Hurt
By l mo
My body is hurt,
Bruised, broken, and frail.
It hurts when I walk,
When I talk, when I breathe.
I am hurt so much more
Than just physically.
It hurts me to think
About who did this to me.
I can't believe someone
Could be so damn heartless
To beat her own daughter
And then laugh about it.
Sometimes I just wish
That dad were here now.
Why did he leave me
With this woman from hell?
There isn't a place
Where I can escape from the pain.
They beat me at school,
And at home it's the same.
I'm afraid to make friends,
They'll discover my secret,
And abandon me here,
Just like my dad did.
I need to escape
From this hell hole called life.
I can't take much more of this,
She'll make me bleed 'til I die.
My body is hurt,
Bruised, broken, and frail.
It hurts when I walk,
When I talk, when I breathe.
Comments on "Hurt"
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A former member wrote:
omg i could really fell the pain in that one. i love it . really i do!!!
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On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
oh yes, and its the ones who have lived through it that can tell you that evil in all it's forms exist. it is seen in the eyes...abattoir
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A former member wrote:
nice, it's sad to read some alot of the comments left on poems like these, it's sad to hear that anybody can relate or that anyone has gone through this, life is a bitch i hope all the real evil doers go to hell
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On Sunday, August 14, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
thanks, guys. And this isnt based on my life. I actually got the inspiration to write it from a story I read online, but I twisted the plot a bit. In the story it was the dad who was the villian, and the mom the dead protector.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
that's really harsh i hope things get better if it's true
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A former member wrote:
it's so sad. i can related to what you say, it's very good!
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, Just a Rose
(25) wrote:
wow this is soooo sad...i just dont understand how anybody could do that shit.nice write tho
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A former member wrote:
this is really touching.....and i hope its not true.....good write.....