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Anti-inversal thoughts
By rainbowgoth
I'm shivering
But i'm burning up
I'm alive
But i'm dying inside
I listen
But i don't hear
I touch you
But i don't feel
I love you
But i don't want to
I'm a poet
But i've forgotten the words
I'm making promises
But i can't keep them
I'm building walls
But i don't know what i'm trying to keep out
Then it hits me
Pow
Like a smack in the face
I'm afraid of the truth
I'm afraid of the world
I'm afriad of everything
But i don't know why
All i know is that i'm lost
But i know exactly where i am
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Copyright 2005 rainbowgoth
Published on Saturday, May 14, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Dysphoria
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wrote:
nice write, i like it
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A former member wrote:
Wow, that's amazing, and it completely says everything that I couldn't find the words for... Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
good one ..
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Fear... so... scary. lol.
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
oh yeah, I know this feeling... incredible way you choose to present this...I love it....
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
As so many can relate, I can join in that. Excellent work!
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
:) simple to the point! I enjoyed this very much.. ~b
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
Wow, I relate to this, I like your phrasing, great write
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