The Wild Flower Women (a triolet)

By manunkind

The wild flower women are sipping tea
As the sun so softly blows and shines
Sunflower blossom dames chat merrily
The wild flower women are sipping tea
Petal-like girls dance in the fields, hair curling like the raging sea
Tinkling laughter pours from rosebud lips, smooth and fine
The wild flower women are sipping tea
As the sun so softly blows and shines

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Copyright 2005 voix de femme
Published on Saturday, May 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: - whimsical and, an absolute pleasure to read, my Dear.

  • A former member wrote: How is it that this piece has so few comments? The poem is adorable; the imagery is simply sublime, as is the sunlit idea and the soft expressions you have used - 'The wild flower women are sipping tea As the sun so softly blows and shines'. Enigmatic -

  • AniDayz On Saturday, May 7, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ahhhyesss!! incredible...i can not tell you how much i appreciate this----creativity lives!

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