Ardor

By ColdScaredAlone

{In your eyes I see love
In your arms I feel love
In your voice I hear love}

Escape.
Complete me
As you
Fill me.
Feel me
Surrounding you.
Racing hearts
Emotions aflame
Sensual rhthyms
Of bodies entwined
We.
Become.
One.
Staggered breathing,
Muscles aching
We.
Are.
One.
Timeless
and
Carefree.
Waves of passion,
Kisses of magic.
This feels
So
Right
Take me away,
I am yours.

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Copyright 2005 ColdScaredAlone
Published on Tuesday, April 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, October 24, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Interesting. Good stuff.

  • Nameless Pariah On Saturday, May 7, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    The title is definitely fitting for the overall poem. Sweet.

  • elisa On Friday, September 1, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    spoken with passion......raw... with a bone grinding beat.... very nice.

  • Metal Lullaby On Friday, September 1, 2006, Metal Lullaby (47)By person wrote:

    i comment this once again, much later... im still in love with it. wonderful poem

  • Metal Lullaby On Sunday, July 10, 2005, Metal Lullaby (47)By person wrote:

    wonderful fucking poem. sweet...and pretty.

  • A former member wrote: amazing, simple, heartfelt....

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    simply beautiful

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