Ardor
By ColdScaredAlone
{In your eyes I see
love
In your arms I feel love
In your voice I hear love}
Escape.
Complete me
As you
Fill me.
Feel me
Surrounding you.
Racing hearts
Emotions aflame
Sensual rhthyms
Of bodies entwined
We.
Become.
One.
Staggered breathing,
Muscles aching
We.
Are.
One.
Timeless
and
Carefree.
Waves of passion,
Kisses of magic.
This feels
So
Right
Take me away,
I am yours.
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Copyright 2005 ColdScaredAlone
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Interesting. Good stuff.
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On Saturday, May 7, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126) wrote:
The title is definitely fitting for the overall poem. Sweet.
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On Friday, September 1, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
spoken with passion......raw... with a bone grinding beat.... very nice.
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On Friday, September 1, 2006, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
i comment this once again, much later... im still in love with it. wonderful poem
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On Sunday, July 10, 2005, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
wonderful fucking poem. sweet...and pretty.
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A former member wrote:
amazing, simple, heartfelt....
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
simply beautiful