Revenge
By Kinkypoptart
Walking among the shadows
In the bright daylight
I see you sitting there on the bench
In the park, oblivious to my presence
And the fact that im going to let you live your worst fear
I think about the things you've done to me
And the things you used to say
I'm overcome with undying hate
Charging from my hiding place
Adrenaline pumping in my veins
My only motivation is anger
The only weapon i'll use is my fist
I come to see you in the hospital
The very next day, of course
Just for the thrill of my game
I ask the nurses for a moment
They leave and now i'm in charge
I pinch off the flow of your oxygen
Laugh while you gasp for your breath
I love the look of mercy in your eyes
Knowing I hold your life in my hands
You know I fucking hate you, I do
This is my moment of revenge
My sweet, sweet blissful rage
Searching for my next weapon...
I see a medical syringe on the dresser
Temple or wrist, which one will I pick
Which hole will become your fate?
I look at your face and you know
That I plan to kill you today
I poke the needle down deep in your wrist
Then slowly, I walk away
It'll be a few hours
Before they come to check on you
By then i'll be long gone...
And I have this awkward feeling
That you will be too.
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Comments on "Revenge"
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A former member wrote:
probally a more reason not to like hospitals
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A former member wrote:
This is pretty bad-ass.
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A former member wrote:
My heart is pounding and i daresay I'll have this stuck in my mind for quite some time afterwards.
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A former member wrote:
you are so freakin visual in all of your poetry ... i think i love you ... ha ha ... seriously, you should get a book together ..
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Chimauron
(87) wrote:
I lllllike it! Especially the fact that you put this bastich on a respirator using nothing but your fists! You must take aerobics :D
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Damn you got a comment from the Stalker, glad I came and read this, he doesn't even comment on mine anymore :: sticks tongue out at Darun:: Anyway, I love this work. It reminds me of some of the things I've written
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A former member wrote:
hell yea, this kicks ass, i love it!!!
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A former member wrote:
sweet sweet revenge, gotta love it. but a write that i love. good work.
-Tom-
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...kinda makes me not want to donate blood anymore, for some wierd reason...all in all, nicely thought out...revenge is always sweet... -Darun