{+*+}Hedonist.{+*+}

By A Velvet Tongue

that violent moon bled
drained....
crisp ..blank....
armies of silence
like droplets of chrome numb
torturing this hedonistic bliss
i weep
torrents of cosmic intrusion
spun glass delusion
intimate shards
alive in aural overdrive
tepid mind fuck..


emotion never leaves the gate
stuck...sickly...primate

no time for gray..
no speed for sale
no space for solidity
no place for comfort
no whore for hire

dont kill me yet
im not prepared to die
sadistic cosmonaut...
my next high

once i thought i had you
wrapped in unabashed bliss
your drug tracked arms..
perfect fit..perfect hiss


he is still a boy
to every killing field
rainbow streaked
and half baked.....wasted..
deposited...
yet he is the best thing
this drug that flames
liquid fire injecting my veins
my lids half shut
a dirty addict....i've become..
i love the slut you've created
my dirty filth

weight-less
meaning-less
hope-less
moral-less
i slip into
unconcious-ness
within a mere taste
a hundred flames
licking my core..
.
.
.

more....

perfect fit.
.................perfect hiss

dirty fucking hedonist..


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Copyright 2005 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Thursday, March 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this made me feel infested... with a tincture of melancholy... of nostalgia... desiring those meaningless, careless nights of nothing but the next high, the anticipated glow of the taboo gathering in dark corners in smoky rooms... and the eventual sexcapa

  • A former member wrote: de to cap off a surreal but, as it now appears, never sublime eve.

  • A former member wrote: *Wow* I love this

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed the first portion very much and the rest flowed with great splendor as well. +T.P.U+

  • A former member wrote: *grins* fit like a glove, the last bit the bow... or maybe the cuffs, whichever, good post

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, March 24, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    oohhh..so mesmerizing! i loved it! -Kel

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 24, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    oh..i love this..i'm speechless

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