that girl

By toy soldier

I got to see her again today
The cutest girl ever
The only one for me

Hair so delicate
A blend between sweet fire
And a light strawberry

Skin so soft
You just want to hold her
For ever if you could

And those eyes
Such big blue eyes
Looking up at me
.
.
.
No looking through me
Like im not even there

I thought only god and my self knew
But when she looks at me
It’s plain to see
she sees
me for me.
.
.
.


The coldest shoulder
Ive ever been given
And I got it form a girl less than two



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Copyright 2005 Michael
Published on Friday, March 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • A former member wrote: This one really speaks to me,.

  • vaultgrl On Wednesday, January 18, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ...thanks for sharing....i really like the emotion in this, and that it's so real....i can see an innocent 2 yr old wise beyond her years, turning away from a faceless man....great write....

  • lordshadow On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    Good work bro. I've felt it.

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    Oh honey, why didn't you tell me about this? Why didn't you tell me when I wsa still there and could offer a shoulder? I'm so sorry Mikey.

  • Delilah On Friday, April 15, 2005, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    I didn't see that coming...I don't have children, so I can't imagine, but this is very heartwrenching..to say the least. ~Delilah~

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, March 21, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    That is very moving and attainable...great piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

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