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Searching
By Shadow Fox
Whispers in a sea of sorrow
like unrelenting thoughts of tomorrow
Tortured soul and heavy mind
searching for something you'll never find
Your heart is aching
your spirit is breaking
Still you search, though you're weak
never knowing what you seek
Still you search, all alone
never knowing what is home
You feel lost and afraid
searching always, night and day
Searching still as time goes by
though you're hurt, you will not cry
Searching still, sorrow growing
searching still, never knowing
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Copyright 2005 Shadow Fox
Published on Monday, February 21, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
beautiful beautiful beautiful...makes me think of how a mother must feel when her child is missing...the relentless task to find a child...thats the feeling i got from this, amazing write! a 10!
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A former member wrote:
this reminded me of some qoute from some philosopher that i don't remember at the moment...but it goes something like this "u cannot seek wut u do not kno because you do not kno how to seek it"
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On Monday, February 21, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313)
wrote:
so full of bittersweetnes that tears feel good for a change...interesting mix of emotion that this brought on... I really like this.
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On Monday, February 21, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautifully written, wonderful rhyme sceme. Sweetly sorrow. Amazing write.
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On Monday, February 21, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
this was sweet somehow....-l-
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