Freedom

By October Death

Don't trust me.

Don't you ever trust me.

I give you the knife to slit my throat.

Slit my wrists...

Do it fast now, baby, before I love you any more.

They're all waiting for me, precious.

Press down and you'll be free.



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Copyright 2005 October Death
Published on Wednesday, January 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Tuesday, August 1, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    different...

  • A former member wrote: this poem was very short fast paced and pissed off. touche!

  • Dei On Friday, October 13, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    i've written this poems sister. i htink i prefer yours. im a fan of short and sweet and fuck you.

  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, May 6, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    very angry and frustrated you seem. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: Hauntingly bitter.. Yet I have felt that way so many times. :) --beautiful

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